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French to English: Stratรฉgie marketing
General field: Bus/Financial
Detailed field: Marketing / Market Research
Source text - French
Une stratรฉgie marketing d'entreprise est une dรฉmarche dโ€™รฉtude et de rรฉflexion dont le but est de s'approcher au plus prรจs de lโ€™adรฉquation offre-demande.

Cette dรฉmarche s'inscrit au sein de la stratรฉgie de l'entreprise.

Il s'agit pour l'entreprise de viser ร  augmenter le chiffre d'affaires, les parts de marchรฉ et la permanence des clients par diffรฉrenciation, motivation ou adaptation de l'offre solvable augmentant ainsi les รฉconomies d'รฉchelle.

Dans ce cadre, le marketing stratรฉgique, composante de la stratรฉgie marketing, s'assure auprรจs des autres fonctions clรฉs de l'entreprise (gestion de la qualitรฉ, logistique, management du systรจme d'information, gestion des ressources humaines) de la faisabilitรฉ de l'offre.

La stratรฉgie marketing se confond souvent avec la stratรฉgie d'entreprise notamment dans les organisations faisant appel ร  un nombre restreint de mรฉtiers (de DAS) et nรฉgocie ainsi directement l'optimisation des synergies (ou flexibilitรฉ) de l'organisation et la rentabilitรฉ attendue par le service financier.

En fait, elle se rรฉsume souvent ร  l'รฉlaboration d'un marketing-mix dont la cible dรฉsignรฉe est le client.
Translation - English
A corporate marketing strategy is a study and reflection process whose objective is to get as close as possible to balancing the supply and demand.

This process is part of the company's strategy.

It's necessary for the company to aim to increase the revenue, the market shares and the client permanency by differentiation, motivation or adaptation of the solvent supply thus increasing the economies of scale.

In this context, the strategic marketing, element of the marketing strategy, ensures with the other key functions of the company (quality management, logistics, management of the information system, Human Resources management) the feasibility of the supply.

The marketing strategy is often confused with the corporate strategy especially in organizations that have a limited number business units (SBU) and thus negotiate directly the synergys optimisation (or flexibility) of the organization and the expected rentability by the financial service.

In fact, it is often summarized as the development of a marketing-mix whose designed target is the client.
Korean to English: Jeremiah 17 (Sermon)
General field: Other
Detailed field: Religion
Source text - Korean
๋ณธ๋ฌธ 1์ ˆ์—์„œ 3๊ฐ€์ง€๋ฅผ ํ‘œ์ถœ์‹œ์ผฐ๋Š”๋ฐ, ๊ธˆ๊ฐ•์„ ๋ ์ฒ ํ•„, ๋งˆ์Œ์˜ ํŒ, ์ œ๋‹จ ๋ฟ”์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๊ทธ๋Ÿผ ์ด๊ฒƒ๋“ค์ด ์˜๋ฏธํ•˜๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์€ ๋ฌด์—‡์ธ๊ฐ€? ๊ทธ๊ฒƒ์€ ์ด์Šค๋ผ์—˜์˜ ์ฃ„๋ฅผ ์ง€์ ํ•˜๊ธฐ ์œ„ํ•ด์„œ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
๋จผ์ € ๊ธˆ๊ฐ•์„ ๋ ์ฒ ํ•„์ด๋ž€:๋‹ค๋ฅธ ๋ฒˆ์—ญ ์„ฑ๊ฒฝ์— ๊ธˆ๊ฐ•์„์€ ๋‹ค์ด์•ผ๋ชฌ๋“œ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๋Œ๋กœ ๋งํ•˜๋ฉด ๋‹ค์ด์•ผ๋ชฌ๋“œ๋ž€ ๊ฐ€์žฅ ๊ฐ•ํ•œ ๋Œ๋กœ, ์ฒ ํ•„๋์ด๋ž€ ๋‹ค์ด์•„๋ชฌ๋“œ ๋์„ ๋‚ ์นด๋กญ๊ฒŒ ๋งŒ๋“ ๊ฒƒ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
์œ ๋ฆฌ๋ฅผ ์ž๋ฅผ๋•Œ ๋‹ค์ด์•„๋ชฌ๋“œ ๋์„ ๋‚ ์นด๋กญ๊ฒŒ ๋งŒ๋“ค์–ด์„œ ์‚ฌ์šฉํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค . ๋‹ค์ด์•ผ๋ชฌ๋“œ๋Š” ๊น์œผ๋ฉด ๊น์„์ˆ˜๋ก ๋” ๋น›์ด ๋‚˜๊ฒŒ ๋˜์–ด์žˆ์–ด์š”. ๋‹ค์ด์•ผ๋ชฌ๋“œ๋ฅผ ํฌ๋ฆฌ์Šค์ณ”์— ๋น„์œ ํ•œ๋‹ค๋ฉด ํ•˜๋‚˜๋‹˜์˜ ๋ง์”€์œผ๋กœ ๋” ๋งŽ์ด ๊น์ธ ์„ฑ๋„๋“ค์€ ๊ทธ๋“ค์—๊ฒŒ์„œ ๋” ๋น›์ด ๋‚ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
๊ทธ ๋‹ค์Œ ๋งˆ์Œ ํŒ์ด๋ž€ ๋ง์€: ๋‹ค๋ฅธ ๋ฒˆ์—ญ์— ๋Œ๊ฐ™์€ ๋งˆ์Œ์ด๋ผ๊ณ  ๋˜์–ด์žˆ์–ด์š”. ์‚ฌ๋žŒ์˜ ๋งˆ์Œ์€ ๋Œ๊ฐ™์€ ๋งˆ์Œ์ด ์•„๋‹ˆ๋ผ ์˜ฅํ†  ๋ฐญ ๊ฐ™์€ ๊ธฐ๋ฆ„์ง€๊ณ  ๋ถ€๋“œ๋Ÿฌ์šด ๋งˆ์Œ์ด ๋˜์–ด ํ•˜๋‚˜๋‹˜์˜ ๋ง์”€์„ ์‹ฌ๊ฒŒ ์ฐฝ์กฐ๋˜์–ด์žˆ์–ด์š”.
๊ทธ ์˜ฅํ†  ๋ฐญ ๊ฐ™์€ ๋งˆ์Œ์— ๋ง์”€์„ ์‹ฌ์€ ์ž๋“ค์€ ํ•˜๋‚˜๋‹˜๊ป˜ ์ˆœ์ข…ํ•˜๊ฒŒ ๋˜์–ด ์žˆ๊ณ , ํ•˜๋‚˜๋‹˜์ด ๋ณด์‹œ๋Š” ๋ˆˆ์€ ์šฐ๋ฆฌ์˜ ๋งˆ์Œ์„ ๋‹ค์ด์•ผ๋ชฌ๋“œ ์ฒ˜๋Ÿผ ๊ท€ํ•˜๊ฒŒ ์—ฌ๊ธฐ์‹ ๋‹ค๋Š” ๋ง์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
๊ทธ ๋‹ค์Œ ์ œ๋‹จ์˜ ๋ฟ”์ด๋ž€ ์„ฑ์ „์—์„œ ํ•˜๋‚˜๋‹˜๊ป˜ ์˜ˆ๋ฐฐ๋“œ๋ฆฌ๊ธฐ ์œ„ํ•ด ์ œ์‚ฌ ๋“œ๋ฆฌ๋Š” ์ œ๋‹จ์˜ ๋„ค๋ชจํ‰์ด์˜ ๊ธฐ๋‘ฅ์œผ๋กœ ์ด๊ธฐ๋‘ฅ ๋ฟ”์˜ ์˜๋ฏธ๋Š” ํ•˜๋‚˜๋‹˜์˜ ํž˜๊ณผ ๋Šฅ๋ ฅ๊ณผ ๊ตฌ์›์„ ์ƒ์ง•ํ•˜๋ฉฐ ํฌ์ƒ๋ฌผ์„ ๊ณ ์ •์‹œํ‚ค๊ธฐ ์œ„ํ•œ๊ฒƒ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
์‹ ์•ฝ์— ์™€์„œ ์šฐ๋ฆฌ๋ฅผ ์„ฑ์ „์ด๋ผ๊ณ  ๋งํ•˜๋ฉฐ ์„ฑ๊ฒฝ์€ ๋งํ•˜๊ธฐ๋ฅผ ๋„ˆํฌ ๋ชธ์„ ํ•˜๋‚˜๋‹˜์ด ๊ธฐ๋ปํ•˜์‹œ๋Š” ๊ฑฐ๋ฃฉํ•œ ์‚ฐ์ œ์‚ฌ๋กœ ๋“œ๋ ค๋ผ. ๊ทธ๋ž˜์„œ ๋„ค๊ท€ํ‰์ด์˜ ์ œ๋‹จ์˜ ๋ฟ”์ด๋ž€ ๋ง์€ ์šฐ๋ฆฌ๋ฅผ ์‚ฐ์ œ์‚ฌ๋กœ ๋“œ๋ฆฌ๊ธฐ ์œ„ํ•ด ๋‚˜์˜ ์ƒ๊ฐ๊ณผ ๋งˆ์Œ๊ณผ ๋ˆˆ๊ณผ ๊ท€๋ฅผ ํ•˜๋‚˜๋‹˜ ๋ง์”€์— ๊ณ ์ •์‹œ์ผœ ๋†“๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์ด ๋ฐ”๋กœ ๋‚˜๋ฅผ ํฌ์ƒ์˜ ์ œ๋ฌผ๋กœ ์ œ๋‹จ๋ฟ”์— ๊ณ ์ •์‹œํ‚ค๋Š”๊ฒ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
์˜ค๋Š˜ ๋ณธ๋ฌธ์˜ ์ด์Šค๋ผ์—˜์˜ ๋งˆ์Œ์˜ ์ฃ„์™€ ์ œ๋‹จ์— ๋Œ€ํ•œ ์ฃ„๋ž€ ํ•˜๋‚˜๋‹˜์„ ์˜์ง€ํ•˜์ง€ ์•Š๊ณ  ํ•˜๋‚˜๋‹˜์„ ๊ฒฝ์™ธํ•˜์ง€ ์•Š๊ณ  ํ•˜๋‚˜๋‹˜์„ ๋ฒ„๋ฆฌ๊ณ  ๋‹ค๋ฅธ์‹ ์„ ์„ฌ๊ธด์ฃ„์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
๋‹ค์ด์•ผ๋ชฌ๋“œ์˜ ๋‚ ์นด๋กœ์šด ๋์œผ๋กœ ๋Œ๊ฐ™์€ ๋งˆ์ŒํŒ์— ์ƒˆ๊ธด ์ฃ„์™€ ์ œ๋‹จ๋ฟ”์— ์ƒˆ๊ธด ์ฃ„์— ๋Œ€ํ•ด ํ•˜๋‚˜๋‹˜์€ ๊ทธ๋ž˜ ๋„ˆํฌ๋“ค์€ ์ฃ„์ธ์ด์•ผ ๋„ˆํฌ์—๊ฒŒ๋Š” ๊ธํœผ์—†๋Š” ์‹ฌํŒ์„ ๋ฐ›์„๊ฑฐ์•ผ๋ผ๊ณ  ๋งํ•œ๊ฒƒ์ด ์•„๋‹ˆ๋ผ!
์šฐ๋ฆฌ๋Š” ์—๋ ˆ๋ฏธ์•ผ์„œ๋ฅผ ์ž˜๋ชป๋ณด๋ฉด ํ•˜๋‚˜๋‹˜์€ ๊ธํœผ์ด ์—†๋Š” ์‹ฌํŒ์„ ํ•˜๋Š”๊ฒƒ ๊ฐ™๊ณ  ์ธ๊ฐ„์˜ ์ฃ„๋งŒ ์†์†๋“ค์ด ๋“ค์–ด๋‚ด๋Š”๊ฒƒ ๊ฐ™์ง€๋งŒ ๊ทธ๋Ÿฌ๋‚˜ ํ•˜๋‚˜๋‹˜์€ ์ฃ„์ธ์ผ์ง€๋ผ๋„ ๊ทธ๋“ค์—๊ฒŒ ์šฉ์„œ๋ฐ›๋Š” ๊ธธ์„ ์•Œ๋ ค์ฃผ์‹œ๋Š”๊ฒƒ์ด ์˜ˆ๋ ˆ๋ฏธ์•ผ์„œ์˜ ๋ณธ ์ฃผ์ œ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
๋Œ์•„์˜ค๋ผ ๋„ˆํฌ๊ฐ€ ๋Œ์•„์˜ค๋ ค๊ฑฐ๋“  ๋‚˜์—๊ฒŒ ๋Œ์•„์˜ค๋ผ, ํ•˜๋‚˜๋‹˜์€ ์šฐ๋ฆฌ๊ฐ€ ๋ฐฉํ–ฅ์„ ๋Œ๋ ค์„œ ๋Œ์•„์˜ค๊ธฐ๋ฅผ ๊ธฐ๋‹ค๋ฆฌ์‹œ๋Š” ๋ถ„์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค ๋ฒŒ์ฃผ๊ธฐ ์œ„ํ•œ ๋ถ„์ด ์•„๋‹™๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๊ณต์˜์˜ ์‹ฌํŒ๊ด€์ด์‹  ํ•˜๋‚˜๋‹˜์€ ๋๊นŒ์ง€ ๋ฐ˜ํ•ญํ•˜๋Š” ์‚ฌ๋žŒ๋“ค์—๊ฒŒ ์‹ฌํŒ์„ ๋‚ด๋ ค์…”๋ผ๋„ ๋‹ค์‹œ ํšŒ๋ณต์‹œํ‚ค์‹ ๋‹ค๋Š” ๋ง์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์˜ค๋Š˜ ๋ณธ๋ฌธ ๋ง์”€์„ ๋‘๊ฐ€์ง€๋งŒ ๋ณด๊ฒ ์–ด์š”.
1๋ฒˆ์งธ ์šฐ๋ฆฌ์•ˆ์— ์žˆ๋Š” ์•…ํ•œ์ฃ„๋“ค: ์ด์Šค๋ผ์—˜์ด ๋งˆ์Œ์— ์ƒˆ๊ธด ์ฃ„์™€ ์„ฑ์ „ ์ œ๋‹จ ๋ฟ”์— ์ฃ„๋ฅผ ์ƒˆ๊ฒผ๋‹ค๋ผ๊ณ  ๋งํ•˜๋Š”๋ฐ: ๊ทธ๋“ค์ด ์„ฑ์ „์—์„œ ์˜ˆ๋ฐฐ๋ฅผ ์•ˆ๋“œ๋ฆฐ๊ฒƒ์ด ์•„๋‹™๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๊ธฐ๋ณธ์ ์œผ๋กœ ์„ฑ์ „ ์ƒํ™œ์„ ํ–ˆ๊ณ . ๊ธฐ๋ณธ์ ์œผ๋กœ ํฌ์ƒ์˜ ์ œ๋ฌผ์„ ๋“œ๋ ธ์–ด์š”
์ค‘์š”ํ•œ๊ฒƒ์€ ๊ทธ๋“ค์€ ์„ฑ์ „์•ˆ์— ์ž‡์—ˆ์œผ๋‚˜ ๊ทธ๋“ค์€ ์‹ฌ๋ น์œผ๋กœ ์—๋ฐฐ๋ฅผ ๋“œ๋ฆฐ๊ฒƒ์ด ์•„๋…œ์š”. ๊ทธ๋“ค ๋งˆ์Œ์•ˆ์— ์žˆ๋Š” ์‹ฌ๋ น์•ˆ์— ์ง€์–ด์ง„ ์„ฑ์ „์—์„œ ์˜ˆ๋ฐฐ๋ฅผ ๋“œ๋ฆฐ๊ฒƒ์ด ์•„๋‹™๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์‹ ์•ฝ์—์„œ๋Š” ์šฐ๋ฆฌ ์ž์‹ ๋“ค์„ ์„ฑ์ „์ด๋ผ๋ถˆ๋Ÿฌ์š”.
์šฐ๋ฆฌ์˜ ๋ชธ์ด ๊ตํšŒ์— ๋‚˜์™€์žˆ์–ด๋„ ๋งˆ์Œ์•ˆ์— ์žˆ๋Š” ์„ฑ์ „์ด ๋ฌธ์ด ๋‹ซํ˜€ ์žˆ๋‹ค๋ผ๋ฉด ์šฐ๋ฆฌ๋Š” ์˜ˆ๋ฐฐ๋ฅผ ๋“œ๋ฆฐ๊ฒƒ์ด ์•„๋‹™๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์ฆ‰ ๋ณด์ด๋Š” ์„ฑ์ „์— ๋‚˜์™€์žˆ์–ด๋„ ๋ณด์ด์ง€ ์•Š๋Š” ์„ฑ์ „ ๋ฌธ์ด ๋‹ซํ˜€์ž‡๋‹ค๋ผ๋ฉด ๊ทธ ์—๋ฐฐ๋Š” ์ฃฝ์€ ์˜ˆ๋ฐฐ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
์„ฑ๊ฒฝ์€ ๋งํ•˜๊ธฐ๋ฅผ ์˜ˆ๋ฐฐํ•˜๋Š” ์ž๊ฐ€ ์‹ ๋ น๊ณผ ์ง„์ •์œผ๋กœ ์˜ˆ๋ฐฐ๋ฅผ ๋“œ๋ ค๋ผ. ์‹ ๋ น๊ณผ ์ง„์ •์œผ๋กœ ๋“œ๋ฆฌ๋Š” ์˜ˆ๋ฐฐ๋ž€ ๋ˆˆ์— ๋ณด์ด๋Š” ์˜ˆ๋ฐฐ๊ฐ€ ์•„๋‹ˆ๋ผ ๋ฐ”๋กœ ์šฐ๋ฆฌ ๋งˆ์Œ์˜ ์„ฑ์ „์—์„œ ๋“œ๋ฆฌ๋Š” ์˜ˆ๋ฐฐ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
ํ•˜๋‚˜๋‹˜์€ ์˜ˆ๋ ˆ๋ฏธ์•ผ์—๊ฒŒ ๋ช…๋ นํ•˜๊ธฐ๋ฅผ ๋„ˆ๋Š” ์„ฑ์ „์— ์˜ค๋Š” ์‚ฌ๋žŒ๋“ค์„ ํ–ฅํ•˜์—ฌ ๋ฌธ ์•ž์— ์„œ์„œ ์„ ํฌํ•˜๋ผ ๋„ˆํฌ์˜ ๊ธธ๊ณผ ํ–‰์œ„๊ฐ€ ๋ฐ”๋ฅด์ง€ ์•Š์œผ๋ฉด์„œ ์ด๊ณณ์ด ์—ฌํ˜ธ์™€์˜ ์„ฑ์ „์ด๋‹ค ์—ฌํ˜ธ์™€์˜ ์„ฑ์ „์ด๋‹ค ํ•˜์ง€๋งˆ๋ผ,
ํ•˜๋‚˜๋‹˜์€ ์‹ฌ์žฅ์„ ์‚ดํ”ผ๊ณ  ํ๋ถ€๋ฅผ ์‹œํ—˜ํ•˜์‹œ๊ณ  ์‚ฌ๋žŒ์˜ ํ–‰์œ„์™€ ํ–‰์‹ค์„ ๋ณด๊ณ  ๊ณ„์‹œ๋Š” ๋ถ„์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์ด์Šค๋ผ์—˜์€ ๋น„๋ก ์„ฑ์ „์— ์•‰์•„์žˆ์—ˆ์ง€๋งŒ ๊ทธ๋“ค์˜ ํ–‰์‹ค์€ ์„ฑ์ „์ด๋ผํ•ด์„œ ํ•˜๋‚˜๋‹˜์„ ์„ฌ๊ธด๊ฒƒ์ด ์•„๋‹ˆ๋ผ ํ•˜๋‚˜๋‹˜์„ ๋ฒ„๋ฆฌ๊ณ  ๋‹ค๋ฅธ์‹ ์„ ๊ทธ๋“ค์˜ ๋งˆ์Œ์—์„œ ์„ฌ๊ฒผ์–ด์š”.
๊ทธ๋“ค์€ ์ด๋ฏธ ๋งˆ์Œ์˜ ์„ฑ์ „์— ์šฐ์ƒ์„ ์—๋ฐฐํ•˜๊ณ  ์„ฌ๊ธฐ๋Š” ์ฃ„๋ฅผ ๊ฐ€์ง€๊ณ  ํ•˜๋‚˜๋‹˜์˜ ์„ฑ์ „์— ์˜ค๋‹ˆ ๊ทธ๊ฒƒ์ด ์„ฑ์ „์˜ ์ œ๋‹จ๋ฟ”์— ์ฃ„๋ฅผ ์ƒˆ๊ฒผ๋‹ค๋ผ๋Š” ๋ง์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์šฐ๋ฆฌ๋„ ๋งˆ์ฐฌ๊ฐ€์ง€ ๋‚ด ๋งˆ์Œ์˜ ์„ฑ์ „์— ์ด๋ฏธ ์ฃ„๋ฅผ ์ƒˆ๊ฒจ ๊ฐ€์ง€๊ณ  ์™€์„œ ๊ตํšŒ์— ์•‰์•„ ์žˆ๋‹คํ•ด์„œ ํ•˜๋‚˜๋‹˜์„ ์˜ˆ๋ฐฐ๋“œ๋ฆฌ๊ณ  ํ•˜๋‚˜๋‹˜์„ ์„ฌ๊ธฐ๋Š”๊ฒƒ์ด ์•„๋‹ˆ๋ผ
์˜คํžˆ๋ ค ์ œ๋‹จ๋ฟ”์— ์ฃ„๋ฅผ ์ƒˆ๊ธฐ๋Š” ๊ฒฐ๊ณผ๊ฐ€ ๋ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๋งˆํƒœ๋ณต์œผ์Œ5์žฅ ํ˜•์ œ์—๊ฒŒ ์›๋ง์„ ๋“ค์„๋งŒํ•œ ์ผ์ด์žˆ๊ฑฐ๋“  ์˜ˆ๋ฌผ์„ ์ œ๋‹จ์•ž์—๋‘๊ณ  ํ˜•์ œ์™€ ํ™”๋ชฉํ•œํ›„ ์—๋ฌผ์„ ๋“œ๋ ค๋ผ. ๋„ˆํžˆ๊ฐ€ ๋ถ„์ด ๋‚˜๋„ ํ•ด๊ฐ€์ง€๋Š”๊ฒƒ์„ ๋„˜๊ธฐ์ง€๋งˆ๋ผ. ์ด๋ง์”€์€ ์šฐ๋ฆฌ์˜ ๋งˆ์Œ์˜ ์„ฑ์ „์ด ์–ผ๋งˆ๋‚˜ ํ•˜๋‚˜๋‹˜๊ป˜ ์ง„๋ฆฌ์™€ ์˜์œผ๋กœ ์˜ˆ๋ฐฐ๋“œ๋ฆฌ๋Š”๊ฒƒ์ด ์ค‘์š”ํ•œ๊ฐ€๋ฅผ ๋ณด์—ฌ์ค๋‹ˆ๋‹ค
๋งŒ์ผ ๋‚ด๊ฐ€ ์˜ˆ๋ฐฐ๋“œ๋ฆฌ๋Ÿฌ ๋‚˜์™€์„œ๋„ ๋‹ค๋ฅธ ๊ฒƒ์„ ์ƒ๊ฐํ•˜๊ณ  ๋‹ค๋ฅธ ์žก๋…, ๋‚ด ๋งˆ์Œ์ด ์„ธ์ƒ์— ๋นผ์•—๊ฒจ์žˆ๋‹ค๋ฉด ๋‚˜๋Š” ํ•˜๋‚˜๋‹˜์„ ๋ฒ„๋ฆฌ๊ณ  ๋‹ค๋ฅธ์‹ ์„ ์„ฌ๊ธฐ๋Š”๊ฒƒ์ด์š” ๋‚ด ๋งˆ์Œ์€ ํ•˜๋‚˜๋‹˜์„ ๊ฒฝ์™ธํ•˜๊ณ  ์˜์ง€ํ•˜๊ธฐ ๋ณด๋‹ค ์„ธ์ƒ๊ฒƒ๋“ค์„ ๊ฒฝ์™ธํ•˜๊ณ  ์˜์ง€ํ•˜๋Š” ๊ฒ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
์˜ˆ๋ ˆ๋ฏธ์•ผ์„œ 2์žฅ13์ ˆ์— ์ด์Šค๋ผ์—˜์˜ ๋‘๊ฐ€์ง€ ์ฃ„์— ๋Œ€ํ•˜์—ฌ ๋งํ•˜๊ธฐ๋ฅผ ์ƒ์ˆ˜์˜ ๊ทผ์›๋˜์‹  ํ•˜๋‚˜๋‹˜์„ ๋ฒ„๋ฆฐ์ฃ„: ํ•˜๋‚˜๋‹˜์„ ๋ฒ„๋ฆฐ ์ฃ„๋ž€ ๋ณธ๋ฌธ์žฅ์˜ 13์ ˆ์— ๋‹ค์‹œ ๋งํ•˜๊ธฐ๋ฅผ, ์ƒ์ˆ˜์˜ ๊ทผ์›์ด์‹  ์ฃผ๋ฅผ ๋ฒ„๋ฆฌ๋Š”์ž๋Š” ๋‹ค์ด์•ผ๋ชฌ๋“œ ์ฒ ํ•„๋์œผ๋กœ ์ฃ„๋ฅผ ์ƒˆ๊ธด์ž๋‹ค.
2์žฅ 13์ ˆ์— ๋ฌผ์„ ๊ฐ€๋‘์ง€ ๋ชปํ•  ์Šค์Šค๋กœ ํŒ ํ„ฐ์ง„ ์›…๋ฉ์ด๊ฐ€ ์ฃ„๋ผ๊ณ  ๋งํ•˜๊ณ  ์žˆ๋Š”๋ฐ. ์•„๋‹ˆ ํ„ฐ์ง„ ์›…์—‰์ด๋ฅผ ํŒ๊ฒƒ์ด ์–ด๋–ป๊ฒŒ ์ฃ„๊ฐ€ ๋˜๊ฒ ์–ด์š”. ์—๋ ˆ๋ฏธ์•ผ๋Š” ์—ฌ๊ธฐ์— ๋Œ€ํ•ด 14์ ˆ๋ถ€ํ„ฐ ๋‹ค์‹œ ์„ค๋ช…์„ ํ•˜๊ณ ์žˆ์–ด์š”.
2์žฅ 19์ ˆ์— ๋„ค ์ฃ„๊ฐ€ ๋„ˆ๋ฅผ ์ง•๊ฒŒํ• ๊ฒƒ์ด๋‹ค. ๊ทธ๋Ÿฐ์ฆ‰, consider then realize ์ฆ‰ ์ด๋ง์€ ๋„ค์ฃ„๋ฅผ ์ƒ๊ฐํ•ด๋ณด๊ณ  ๊นจ๋‹ฌ์•„๋ผ 19์ ˆ๋ถ€ํ„ฐ ๊ทธ ๋‘๊ฐ€์ง€ ์ฃ„์— ๋Œ€ํ•˜์—ฌ ๋ณด์ถฉ์„ค๋ช…์„ ํ•˜๊ณ ์žˆ์–ด์š”. ๋„ค ์ƒ์ˆ˜์ธ ํ•˜๋‚˜๋‹˜์„ ๋ฒ„๋ฆผ๊ณผ ๋„ค ๋งˆ์Œ์— ๋‚˜๋ฅผ ์˜์ง€ํ•˜๊ณ  ๊ฒฝ์™ธํ•จ์ด ์—†๋Š”๊ฒƒ์ด ์•…์ด๋‹ค๋ผ๊ณ  2์žฅ 19์ ˆ์— ๋งํ•˜๊ณ  ๊ณ„์…”์š”,
์ƒ์ˆ˜์˜ ๊ทผ์›์€ ํ•˜๋‚˜๋‹˜์ด์‹ญ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค ๊ทธ๋Ÿฌ๋ฉด ์ƒ์ˆ˜๋ฅผ ๋งˆ์‹œ๊ธฐ ์œ„ํ•ด ๋ˆ„๊ฐ€ ๊ทธ ์šฐ๋ฌผ์„ ํŒŒ์•ผํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๊นŒ? ๋ฐ”๋กœ ๋‚˜์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๊ทธ๋Ÿฐ๋ฐ ๊ทธ ์ƒ์ˆ˜์˜ ๊ทผ์›์ด์‹  ํ•˜๋‚˜๋‹˜์„ ๋ฒ„๋ฆฌ๊ณ , ๋‹ค๋ฅธ ์ƒ์ˆ˜๋ฅผ ๊ตฌํ•˜๊ธฐ ์œ„ํ•ด ์šฐ๋ฌผ์„ ํŒ ๋Š”๋ฐ ๊ทธ ์šฐ๋ฌผ์€ ๋ฌผ์ด ๊ณ ์ผ์ˆ˜ ์—†๋Š” ํ„ฐ์ง„์šฐ๋ฌผ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค,
์˜ˆ๋ ˆ๋ฏธ์•ผ์˜ ๊ณ ๋ฐฑ์„ ์˜ค๋Š˜ ๋ณธ๋ฌธ์žฅ์—์„œ ๋ณด๋ฉด ์‚ฌ๋žŒ์ด ์–ด์ฐŒ ์‹ ์ด ์•„๋‹Œ๊ฒƒ์œผ๋กœ ์‹ ์„ ์‚ผ๊ฒ ๋‚˜์ด๊นŒ? ์ƒ๋ช…์˜ ์›…๋ฉ์ด ์ด์‹  ํ•˜๋‚˜๋‹˜์„ ๋ฒ„๋ฆฐ์ฃ„์™€ ๋‹ค๋ฅธ ์‹ ์„ ์„ฌ๊ธฐ๊ธฐ ์œ„ํ•ด ์ฃฝ์Œ์˜ ํ„ฐ์ง„ ์›…๋ฉ์ด๋ฅผ ํŒ๊ฒƒ์ด ์ฃ„๋ผ๋Š” ๊ฒ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์ฆ‰ ์ด์Šค๋ผ์—˜์€ ํ•˜๋‚˜๋‹˜์„ ๋ฒ„๋ฆฌ๊ณ  ๋‹ค๋ฅธ ์‹ ์„ ์„ฌ๊ฒผ๋‹ค๋Š” ๋ง์ด๋ฉฐ. ํ•˜๋‚˜๋‹˜๋งŒ์„ ์˜์ง€ํ•˜์ง€ ์•Š๊ณ  ๊ฒฝ์™ธํ•˜์ง€ ์•Š๋Š”๊ฒƒ์ด ์ฃ„๋ผ๋Š”๊ฒ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
2๋ฒˆ์งธ ์šฐ๋ฆฌ๋Š” ์šฐ๋ฆฌ์˜ ์ฃ„๋ฅผ ์ง€์›Œ๋ฒ„๋ฆด์ˆ˜ ์—†๊ณ  ์šฉ์„œ ํ• ์ˆ˜ ์—†์ง€๋งŒ ์ฃผ๋‹˜์€ ํ•˜์‹ค์ˆ˜์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์ฐฌ์–‘์— ์ฃผ๋‹˜์˜ ๋Šฅ๋ ฅ์€ ํ•œ์—†์ด ํฌ์˜ค๋‹ˆ ๋Œ๊ฐ™์€ ๋‚ด๋งˆ์Œ ๊ณง ๋…น์—ฌ ์ค์†Œ์„œ ๋งž์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์ฃผ๋‹˜์˜ ๋Šฅ๋ ฅ์ด ์•„๋‹ˆ๊ณ ๋Š” ์šฐ๋ฆฌ์˜ ์ฃ„๋Š” ์ง€์›Œ์ง€์ง€๋„ ๋…น์•„์ง€์ง€๋„ ์šฉ์„œํ•จ๋„ ๋˜์ง€ ์•Š์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
์˜ˆ๋ ˆ๋ฏธ์•ผ์„œ 13์žฅ 23์ ˆ์— ๋ฒˆ์—ญ์ด ์™„์ „ ๋ฐ˜๋Œ€๋กœ ์ž˜๋ชป๋‚˜์™€ ์žˆ์–ด์„œ ์˜์–ด๋ฅผ ๋‹ค์‹œ ์‰ฝ๊ฒŒ ๋ฒˆ์—ญํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์ด๋””์˜คํ”ผ์•„ ์‚ฌ๋žŒ์ด ๊ทธ ๊ฒ€์€ ํ”ผ๋ถ€์ƒ‰๊ฐˆ์„ ํฐ ์ƒ‰๊น”๋กœ ๋ณ€ํ•˜๊ฒŒ ํ• ์ˆ˜ ์—†๊ณ ,
ํ‘œ๋ฒ”์˜ ๋ชธ์— ์žˆ๋Š” ์–ผ๋ฃฉ๋ฌด๋Šฌ๋ฅผ ๋ฐ”๊ฟ€์ˆ˜ ์—†๋“ฏ์ด ์ƒ์Šต์ ์œผ๋กœ ์•…์„ ํ–‰ํ•˜๋Š” ๋„ˆํฌ๋„ ์„ ์„ ํ–‰ํ• ์ˆ˜ ์—†๋‹ค. ์ฃ„์— ์ต์ˆ™ํ•˜๊ณ  ์ฃ„์— ๋ฌผ๋“  ๋งˆ์Œ์„ ์šฐ๋ฆฌ๋Š” ๋ณ€ํ• ๊ฒŒ ํ• ์ˆ˜ ์—†๋‹ค๋ผ๋Š” ๋ง์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
์—๋ ˆ๋ฏธ์•ผ์„œ 4์žฅ์— ๋„ˆํฌ๋Š” ์Šค์Šค๋กœ ํ• ๋ ˆ๋ฅผ ํ•˜์—ฌ ๋งˆ์Œ์— ํ• ๋ ˆ๋ฅผ ๋ฐ›๊ณ  ๊ทธ ๋งˆ์Œ์˜ ๊ฐ€์ฃฝ์„ ๋ฒ ๊ณ  ๋‚˜ ์—ฌํ˜ธ์™€๊ป˜ ์†ํ•˜๋ผ. ์ด์Šค๋ผ์—˜ ๋ฐฑ์„ฑ์ด ์ฃ„์—์„œ ๋Œ์•„์„œ์„œ ํ•˜๋‚˜๋‹˜๊ป˜ ๋‹ค์‹œ ์†ํ•˜๊ธฐ๋ฅผ ์›ํ•˜์…จ์–ด์š”. ๊ตฌ์•ฝ์—์„œ๋Š” ๋งˆ์Œ์— ํ• ๋ ˆ๋ฅผ ๋ฐ›๊ณ  ๋งˆ์Œ์˜ ๊ฐ€์ฃฝ์„ ์”ป๋Š” ์ฒ ์ €ํ•œ ํšŒ๊ฐœ์™€ ํ•˜๋‚˜๋‹˜๊ป˜ ๋‹ค์‹œ ์†ํ•˜๋ฏ€๋กœ ์ฃ„์‚ฌํ•จ์„ ๋ฐ›์•˜์ง€๋งŒ
์˜ˆ์ˆ˜๋‹˜์ด ์˜จ ํ›„๋กœ๋Š” ๋‚ด๊ฐ€ ๋งˆ์Œ์˜ ํ• ๋ ˆ๋ฅผ ๋ฐ›๊ณ  ๋งˆ์Œ์˜ ๊ฐ€์ฃฝ์„ ์ฐŸ๋Š” ํšŒ๊ฐœ๋ฅผ ํ•˜์—ฌ๋„ ์ฃผ๋‹˜์˜ ๋ณดํ˜ˆ๋กœ ์”ป๊ฒจ์ง€์ง€ ์•Š๊ณ ๋Š” ์•ˆ๋ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
๋จน๋ณด๋‹ค๋„ ๋”๊ฒ€์€ ์ฃ„๋กœ ๋ฌผ๋“  ๋งˆ์Œ์„ ํฐ๋ˆˆ๋ณด๋‹ค ๋”ํฌ๊ฒŒ ๊นจ๋—ํ•˜๊ฒŒ ํ•˜์˜€๋„ค ์ฃผ์˜ ๋ณดํ˜ˆ ํ๋ฅด๋Š”๋ฐ ๋ฏฟ๊ณ  ๋›ฐ์–ด๋‚˜๊ฐ€ ๊นจ๋—ํ•˜๊ฒŒ ๋˜์—ˆ๋„ค ์šฐ๋ฆฌ๋Š” ์ฃผ์˜ ๋ง์”€์„ ์˜์ง€ํ•˜์—ฌ ์—์ˆ˜์˜ ๋ณดํ˜ˆ ์™ธ์—๋Š” ์šฐ๋ฆฌ์˜ ์ฃ„๋Š” ์”ป์„ ์ˆ˜๊ฐ€ ์—†์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค
๊ทธ๋ž˜์„œ ์ฃผ๋‹˜์€ ๊ทธ ํ”ผ๊ฐ’์œผ๋กœ ์šฐ๋ฆฌ๋ฅผ ์‚ฌ์‹ ๊ฒƒ์ด์š” ๊ทธํ”ผ๋กœ ์šฐ๋ฆฌ์ฃ„๋ฅผ ์‚ฌํ•˜์‹ ๊ฒƒ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์šฐ๋ฆฌ๋Š” ์˜ˆ์ˆ˜๋ฅผ ๋ฏฟ์Œ์œผ๋กœ ์ฃ„๋ฅผ ์ก‹์„๋•Œ ํšŒ๊ฐœ๋งŒํ•˜๋ฉด ๊ทธ๋ถ„์˜ ๋ณดํ˜ˆ๋กœ ์šฐ๋ฆฌ์˜ ์ฃ„๊ฐ€ ์”ป๊ธฐ๋Š” ๊ฒ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๋‚˜์˜ ์ฃ„๋ฅผ ์”ป๊ธฐ๋Š” ์˜ˆ์ˆ˜์˜ ํ”ผ๋ฐ–์— ์—†๋„ค. ๋‹ค์‹œ ์ œ์ž๋ฆฌ์— ์˜ค๊ฒŒํ•˜๊ธฐ๋„ ์˜ˆ์ˆ˜์˜ ํ”ผ๋ฐ–์— ์—†๋„ค.
์—๋ ˆ๋ฏธ์•ผ์„œ 2์žฅ์— ๋„ˆํฌ๊ฐ€ ์žฟ๋ฌผ์„ ๊ฐ€์ง€๊ณ  ์Šค์Šค๋กœ ์”ป์„์ง€๋ผ๋„, ๋งŽ์€ ๋น„๋ˆ„๋ฅผ ์“ธ์ง€๋ผ๋„ ๋„ˆํฌ์˜ ์ฃ„๊ฐ€ ๊ทธ๋Œ€๋กœ ์žˆ์œผ๋ฆฌ๋‹ˆ, ์ด๊ฒŒ ๋ฌด์Šจ๋ง์ž…๋‹ˆ๊นŒ? ์šฐ๋ฆฌ๋Š” ์ธ๊ฐ„์˜ ์–ด๋– ํ•œ ๋ฐฉ๋ฒ•์œผ๋กœ๋„ ์šฐ๋ฆฌ์ฃ„๋ฅผ ์”ป์„์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๊ฑฐ๋‚˜ ์šฉ์„œํ• ์ˆ˜ ์—†๋‹ค๋Š” ๋ง์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๋ˆ์œผ๋กœ ์šฐ๋ฆฌ์ฃ„๋ฅผ ์šฉ์„œํ•จ๋ฐ›์„์ˆ˜ ์ž‡๊ฒŸ์–ด์š”?
์•„๋‹ˆ๋ฉด ๋ช…์˜ˆ๋กœ ์šฐ๋ฆฌ์˜ ์ฃ„๋ฅผ ์‚ฌํ•จ๋ฐ›์„์ˆ˜ ์ž‡์„๊นŒ์š”? ๋‚ด๊ฐ€ ๋น„๋ก ์‚ฌ๋žŒํ•˜๊ณ  ์ง€์€์ฃ„๋„ ์‚ฌ๋žŒ๋ผ๋ฆฌ ์„œ๋กœ ์šฉ์„œํ• ์ง€๋ผ๋„ ์šฐ๋ฆฌ์˜ ์ฃ„๋Š” ํ•˜๋Š˜๋‚˜๋ผ์— ๊ทธ๋Œ€๋กœ ๋‚จ์•„์žˆ์–ด์š”? ์™œ ์˜์ ์ธ ์ฃ„์˜ ๋ฌธ์ œ๋ฅผ ํ•ด๊ฒฐํ•˜์ง€ ์•Š๊ณ ๋Š” ๋ ์ˆ˜๊ฐ€ ์—†์–ด์š”.
์•„๋ฌด๋ฆฌ ๋ณด์ด๋Š” ์‚ฌ๋žŒ๊ณผ์˜ ๊ด€๊ณ„ ์†์˜ ์ฃ„๋ผ๋„ ์šฐ๋ฆฌ๋Š” ๋ณด์ด์ง€ ์•Š๋Š” ๋˜ํ•˜๋‚˜์˜ ์˜์ ์ธ ์ฃ„์— ๊ฑธ๋ ค์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์™œ ์šฐ๋ฆฌ๋Š” ํ•˜๋‚˜๋‹˜์œผ๋กœ ๋ถ€ํ„ฐ ์ฐฝ์กฐํ•จ์„ ๋ฐ›์•˜๊ณ  ์šฐ๋ฆฌ๋Š” ํ•˜๋‚˜๋‹˜์˜ ๋ฒ•์•ˆ์—์„œ ์‚ด๊ณ  ์žˆ๊ธฐ ๋•Œ๋ฌธ์— ํ•˜๋‚˜๋‹˜์˜ ์šฉ์„œ๊ฐ€ ์—†์ด๋Š” ๋˜์ง€ ์•Š์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
ํ•˜๋‚˜๋‹˜์˜ ์‹ญ๊ณ„๋ช…๊ณผ ๋ง์”€์€ ๋ณด์ด๋Š” ์ฃ„๋“ , ๋ณด์ด์ง€ ์•Š๋Š” ์ฃ„๋“ ; ์ฃ„๋ฅผ ์ง“์ง€ ๋ง๋ผ๋Š” ๋ฒ•์œจ์ด ์žˆ๊ธฐ ๋•Œ๋ฌธ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๋Œ€๋ฒ•์›์žฅ์ด๋ฉฐ ์ด์„ธ์ƒ์˜ ์™•์ด์‹ , ๋Œ€ํ†ต๋ น์ด์‹  ํ•˜๋‚˜๋‹˜์„ ํ†ต๊ณผํ•˜์ง€ ์•Š๊ณ ๋Š” ๋˜์ง€ ์•Š์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
๋งŒ์ผ ๋‚ด๊ฐ€ ์„ธ์ƒ๋ฒ•์„ ์–ด๊ฒจ ๊ฐ์˜ฅ์— ๋“ค์–ด๊ฐ€๊ฒŒ ๋˜์—ˆ๋Š”๋ฐ ๋ฌผ์งˆ๋กœ ๊ฐš๊ฑฐ๋‚˜ ๋‚˜์˜ ๋ช…์˜ˆ๋กœ ์šฉ์„œ๊ฐ€ ๋˜๊ฑฐ๋‚˜ ๊ฐš์„์ˆ˜๊ฐ€ ์—†์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๋ฐ˜๋“ฏ์ด ๋ฒ•์ ์ธ ์ ˆ์ฐจ๋ฅผ ๊ฑฐ์ณ์•ผํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๊ทธ๋ฆฌ๊ณ  ๋Œ€๋ฒ•์›์žฅ์ด ์˜ค์ผ€์ดํ•˜๋ฉด ๋Œ€ํ†ต๋ น์ด ํŠน๋ณ„ ์‚ฌ๋ฉด ํ•ด์ฃผ๋ฉด ๋งŒ์‚ฌ ์˜ค์ผ€์ด
๋ชจ์„ธ๊ฐ€ ์ด์Šค๋ผ์—˜ ๋ฐฑ์„ฑ์ด ์ฃ„๋ฅผ ์ง€์—ˆ์„๋•Œ ๋ชจ์„ธ๋Š” ์ž๊ธฐ ๋ฐฑ์„ฑ๋“ค์ด ์ฃ„๋กœ ์ธํ•˜์—ฌ ๋‹ค ๋งํ•˜๊ฒŒ ๋˜์ž ์ž๊ธฐ์˜ ์ด๋ฆ„์„ ์ƒ๋ช…์ฑ…์—์„œ ์ง€์›Œ์ฃผ๊ณ  ๊ทธ๋“ค์„ ์šฉ์„œํ•ด ๋‹ฌ๋ผ๊ณ  ๋ง์„ ํ–ˆ์–ด์š”. ๊ทธ๋Ÿฌ๋‚˜ ํ•˜๋‚˜๋‹˜์˜ ๋Œ€๋‹ต์€ ๊ทธ๋“ค์€ ๊ทธ๋“ค์˜ ์ฃ„๋กœ ์ธํ•˜์—ฌ ๋งํ• ๊ฒƒ์ด๋‹ค.
์ฆ‰ ํ•˜๋‚˜๋‹˜์ด ์•„๋‹ˆ๊ณ ๋Š” ์šฐ๋ฆฌ๋Š” ์šฐ๋ฆฌ์˜ ์ฃ„๋ฅผ ์ง€์›Œ๋ฒ„๋ฆด์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๊ฑฐ๋‚˜ ์‚ฌํ• ์ˆ˜ ์—†์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๋˜ํ•œ ์„ฑ๊ฒฝ์€ ๋งํ•˜๊ธฐ๋ฅผ ์ž์‹์ด ์ฃ„๋ฅผ ์ง€์–ด ์•„๋ฒ„์ง€๊ฐ€ ์ฃ„๊ฐ€๋ฅผ ๋ฐ›๋Š”๊ฒƒ์ด ์•„๋‹ˆ๊ณ  ์•„๋ฒ„์ง€๊ฐ€ ์ฃ„๋ฅผ ์ง€์—ˆ๋‹คํ•˜์„œ ์•„๋“ค์ด ๊ทธ์ฃ„์˜ ๋Œ“๊ฐ€๋ฅผ ๋ฐ›๋Š”๊ฒƒ์ด ์•„๋‹ˆ๊ณ  ์ฃ„๋ฅผ ์ง€์€์ž๋Š” ๊ทธ ์ฃ„๊ฐ€๋Œ€๋กœ ๋ณธ์ธ์ด ๋ฐ›๋Š”๋‹ค,
์ฆ‰ ์•„๋ฌด๋„ ๋‚จ์˜ ์ฃ„๋„ ๋‚ด์ฃ„๋„ ์ง€์šธ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๊ฑฐ๋‚˜ ์šฉ์„œํ•ด ์ค„์ˆ˜ ์—†๋‹ค. ์ด๊ฒƒ์ด ๋ฐ”๋กœ ํ•˜๋‚˜๋‹˜์˜ ๊ณต์˜์˜ ์‹ฌํŒ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์˜ค๋Š˜ ๋ณธ๋ฌธ์€ ๋งํ•˜๊ธฐ๋ฅผ ์‚ฌ๋žŒ์„ ๋ฏฟ์œผ๋ฉฐ ์œก์‹ ์œผ๋กœ ๊ทธ์˜ ํž˜์„ ์‚ผ๊ณ  ๋งˆ์Œ์ด ์—ฌํ˜ธ์™€๊ป˜์„œ ๋– ๋‚œ์‚ฌ๋žŒ์€ ์ €์ฃผ๋ฅผ ๋ฐ›์„๊ฒƒ์ด๋‹ค, ์ฆ‰ ๊ทธ์ฃ„์˜ ์‹ฌํŒ์„ ๋ฐ›์„๊ฒƒ์ด๋‹ค. ๊ทธ๋Ÿฌ๋‚˜ ์˜ค์ง ์—ฌํ˜ธ์™€๋ฅผ ์˜์ง€ํ•˜๋ฉฐ ์—ฌํ˜ธ์™€๊ป˜ ์˜๋ขฐํ•˜๋Š” ์ž๋Š” ๋ณต์„ ๋ฐ›์„ ๊ฒƒ์ด๋‹ค. ๋งŒ์‚ฌํ˜•ํ†ตํ•˜๋Š” ๋ณต์ด ์ž„ํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
์šฐ๋ฆฌ๋Š” ์–ด๋–ป๊ฒŒ ํ•ด์•ผ ๋Œ๊ฐ™์€ ๋งˆ์Œ์ด ์˜ฅํ†  ๊ฐ™์€ ๋งˆ์Œ์ด ๋˜์–ด ํ•˜๋‚˜๋‹˜ ๋ง์”€์˜ ์”จ๋ฅผ ์‹ฌ์„์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์„๊นŒ? ๊ณ ๋ฏผ์ด ์•„๋‹๊นŒ์š”? ๋งˆํƒœ๋ณต์Œ13์žฅ์— ์”จ ๋ฟŒ๋ฆฌ๋Š” ๋น„์œ ์— ๋Œ๋ฐญ์— ๋ง์”€์˜ ์”จ๋ฅผ ๋ฟŒ๋ฆฐ์ž๋Š” ๋ฟŒ๋ฆฌ๊ฐ€ ๊นŠ์ง€ ๋ชปํ•˜์—ฌ ๊ณ ๋‚œ๊ณผ ๋ฐ•ํ•ด๊ฐ€ ์˜ฌ๋•Œ ๊ณง ๋„˜์–ด์ง„๋‹ค.
์˜ฅํ† ๊ฐ€ ์•„๋‹Œ ๋”ฑ๋”ฑํ•œ ๋Œ์ง ๊ฐ™์€ ๋งˆ์Œ ๋ฐญ์— ๊ทธ๊ฒƒ๋„ ํ•˜๋‚˜๋‹˜์˜ ๋ง์”€์ด ์–ด๋–ป๊ฒŒ ์‹ฌ์–ด์ง€๊ฒ ์–ด์š”? ๋‚˜๋ฅผ ํ›ˆ๋ จ์‹œํ‚ค๋Š” ๊ธธ๋ฟ์ด ์—†์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๋‚˜์˜ ๋ถ€์กฑํ•จ์„ ํ•ญ์ƒ ๋Š๋ผ๋ฉด์„œ ๋‚ด ์ž์•„๋ฅผ ํ›ˆ๋ จ์‹œํ‚ค๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
ํ•˜๋‚˜๋‹˜ ๋ง์”€์„ ํ†ตํ•˜์—ฌ ๋‚˜๋ฅผ ์ผ๊ตฌ์–ด ๋‚˜๊ฐ€๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์ด ํ›ˆ๋ จ์ด์š”.๊ทธ๋ฆฌ๊ณ  ๋งˆ์นจ๋‚ด๋Š” ๋‚˜๋ฅผ ๊ฐœ์ฒ™ํ•ด ๋‚ด๊ณ  ๊ฐœ๊ฐ„ํ•ด ๋‚ธ๊ฒƒ์„ ๋งํ•˜๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๋‚˜๋ฅผ ๊ฐœ๊ฐ„ํ•˜์ง€ ์•ˆ์œผ๋ฉด ๋‚˜๋ฅผ ๋ณ€ํ™”์‹œํ‚ค์ง€ ์•Š๋Š”๋‹ค๋ฉด ๋ฌด์Šจ์†Œ์šฉ์ด ์žˆ๊ฒ ์–ด์š”. ํ•˜๋‚˜๋‹˜์˜ ๋ง์”€์„ ํ†ตํ•˜์—ฌ ๋‚ด๊ฐ€ ์—์ˆ˜๋ฅผ ๋” ์•Œ์•„๊ฐ€๊ณ  ๋‚ด ์ž์•„์— ๋Œ€ํ•œ๊ฒƒ์€ ๋”์ค„์–ด๊ฐ€๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์ด ํ›ˆ๋ จ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
์„ฑ๊ฒฝ์€ ์‹œ์ž‘๋ถ€ํ„ฐ ์˜ˆ์ˆ˜์š” ๋งˆ์ง€๋ง‰๋„ ์˜ˆ์ˆ˜๋กœ ๋๋‚ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๊ทธ๋ž˜์„œ ์š”ํ•œ๊ณ„์‹œ๋ก์— ๋‚˜๋Š” ์•ŒํŒŒ์š” ์˜ค๋ฉ”๊ฐ€์ด๋ฉฐ ์ฒ˜์Œ๊ณผ ๋‚˜์ค‘์ด์š” ์‹œ์ž‘๊ณผ ๋์ด๋ผ.
์ฐฝ์„ธ๊ธฐ 1์žฅ 1์ ˆ์€ ํ•˜๋Š˜๊ณผ ๋•…์˜ ์ฐฝ์กฐ ์•„๋‹™๋‹ˆ๊นŒ? ๊ทธ๋Ÿฐ๋ฐ ๊ทธ ๋ง์”€์„ ํžˆ๋ธŒ๋ฆฌ์–ด๋กœ ํ’€์–ด๋ณด๋ฉด ํƒœ์ดˆ์— ํ•˜๋‚˜๋‹˜์ด ์ฒœ์ง€๋ฅผ ์ฐฝ์กฐํ•˜์‹œ๋‹ˆ๋ผ๋ผ๋Š” ๋ง์”€ ์†์— ๋ฉ”์‹œ์•„์ด์‹  ์—์ˆ˜๊ฐ€ ์˜ค์‹ ๋‹ค๋ผ๊ณ  ๋˜์–ด ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
์•„๋‹ˆ ํ•˜๋Š˜๊ณผ ๋•…๋งŒ ์ฐฝ์กฐ๋˜์—ˆ์ง€ ์„ธ์ƒ์˜ ๋ชจ๋“ ๊ฒƒ์ด ์•„์ง ์ฐฝ์กฐ๋„ ์•ˆ๋˜์—ˆ๊ณ  ์‚ฌ๋žŒ๋„ ์—†์–ด์„œ ์•„์ง ์ฃ„๊ฐ€ ์—†๋Š”๋ฐ ์—์ˆ˜๊ฐ€ ์˜ค์‹ ๋‹ค๋ผ๊ณ  ๋˜์–ด์žˆ๋Š”๋ฐ! ๊ทธ๋ง์”€์€ ํ•˜๋‚˜๋‹˜์€ ์„ธ์ƒ์„ ์ฐฝ์กฐํ•˜๊ณ  ๋‚ด๋ฒ„๋ ค๋‘๋Š” ๋ถ„์ด ์•„๋‹ˆ๋ผ ๊ฐ„์„ญํ•˜์‹œ๊ณ  ์ฃผ๊ด€ํ•˜์‹œ๊ณ  ๋๊นŒ์ง€ ๋Œ๋ณด์‹œ๊ฒ ๋‹ค๋ผ๋Š” ๋ง์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๊ทธ๋ถ„์€ ๋งˆ์ง€๋ง‰๋„ ๋งˆ๋ฌด๋ฆฌํ•˜๋กœ ๊ผญ ์˜ค์‹ญ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
์™œ ์˜ˆ์ˆ˜๋‹˜๋งŒ์ด ์ƒ๋ช…๊ธธ์ด๊ธฐ ๋•Œ๋ฌธ์ด๋ฉฐ ๊ทธ๊ธธ๋งŒ์ด ์ง„๋ฆฌ์˜ ๊ธธ์ด๊ธฐ ๋•Œ๋ฌธ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์„ฑ๊ฒฝ์€ ๋งํ•˜๊ธฐ๋ฅผ ์˜ˆ์ˆ˜๊ทธ๋ฆฌ์Šค๋„๊ฐ€ ์•„๋‹ˆ๊ณ ๋Š” ์•„๋ฌด๋„ ์•„๋ฒ„์ง€ ํ•˜๋‚˜๋‹˜๊ป˜๋กœ ๊ฐˆ์ž๊ฐ€ ์—†๋‹ค. ์ด์ƒ๋ช…๊ธธ์—์„œ ๋ฒ—์–ด๋‚œ๊ฒƒ์ด ์ฃฝ์Œ์˜ ๊ธธ์ด์š”. ์ฃ„์˜ ๊ธธ์„ ๊ฑท๋Š”๋‹ค๋ผ๋Š” ๊ฒ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ํ•œ์ฃผ๊ฐ„๋„ ์—์ˆ˜๊ทธ๋ฆฌ์Šค๋„๋ฅผ ํ†ตํ•ด ์ƒ๋ช…๊ธธ์„ ๊ฑธ์œผ์‹œ๊ณ  ์ง„๋ฆฌ์˜ ๊ธธ์„ ๊ฑธ์œผ์‹œ๊ธฐ๋ฅผ ์—์ˆ˜๋‹˜ ์ด๋ฆ„์œผ๋กœ ์ถ•์›ํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.


Translation - English
The first verse of the main text mentions these 3 metaphors: the โ€œiron scribe with a diamond tip,โ€ the โ€œtablet of the heartโ€ and the โ€œhorns of the altar.โ€ Then, what would be the meaning behind these? It is to point out Israelโ€™s sins.

First letโ€™s look at the metaphor of the iron scribe with a diamond tip. Diamonds are the strongest rocks that exist, therefore this implies that they are sharpening the iron scribe by adding a diamond tip to its end.

When they cut the glass, they sharpen the diamond tip. The more you cut a diamond the more it shines. Comparing diamonds to Christians, the saints that have been cut more by the word of God will shine the most.

Next letโ€™s analyze the metaphor of the โ€œtablet of the heartโ€: in other translations of the bible itโ€™s described as a โ€œstone heart.โ€ But peopleโ€™s hearts shouldnโ€™t be like a rock, they should have a soft and open heart, like a fertile field, that way Godโ€™s words will be able to be planted in it.

Those who have planted the Word in their clay-like hearts will obey God and this means that in the eyes of the Lord our hearts are as precious as diamonds.

Next, the reference of the โ€œhorns of the altarโ€ inside the church. The horns refer to the pillars that surround the altar where we do the offering to worship God in the Temple. The pillars symbolize the Lordโ€™s strength, power and salvation and act as an anchor for the sacrifice.

The New Testament says that we must treat ourselves as temples and the Bible tells us to please God by giving our bodies as a holy living sacrifice. Thus, when it mentions the horns at the four corners of the altar it means that, in order to give ourselves to God, we must anchor our thoughts, hearts, eyes and ears on the word of the Lord. This is how we offer ourselves as living sacrifices on the horns of the altar.

Todayโ€™s text talks about Israelโ€™s sins of the heart and on the altar. Itโ€™s the sin of forsaking their faith in God, their fear and their dependence in the Lord and starting venerating other gods.

Itโ€™s not that God said โ€œI will give you judgment with no mercy, you sinners!โ€ Referring to the sins engraved on the stonelike tablet of the heart by the sharpened diamond tip and the sins carved on the horns of the altar.

If we read the Book of Jeremiah wrong, it might seem that God gave judgment with no compassion and it seems that all humans are sinners. When instead, what the Book of Jeremiah is saying is that the Lord will show sinners the path to forgiveness.

โ€œIf you will return, then return to me.โ€ The Lord doesnโ€™t give punishment for the sake of it, he is waiting for us to change direction and go back to him. God, with his fair judgment, will give an opportunity to redeem themselves even to those who rebel until the end. On todayโ€™s text, Iโ€™ll only talk about two points.

First, the Evil inside us. It tells us about Israelโ€™s sins carved on their hearts and on the horns of the altar. It doesnโ€™t mean that they worship in the Temple. They basically went to Church and gave the sacrificial offering.

The important point is that even though they were in the temple, they didnโ€™t worship with their spirits. They didnโ€™t worship from their spiritual temple. The New Testament tells us that each of us is a temple of the Lord.

Even if our body is at church, if our spiritual templeโ€™s doors are closed we arenโ€™t worshiping God. Even if we always go to the physical church, if the doors to our invisible temple are closed, that worshiping isnโ€™t real.

The Bible says that worshipers worship in spirit and in truth. This worshiping isnโ€™t the kind that we can see with our eyes, itโ€™s the worship that we do in the temple of our hearts.

The Lord commanded Jeremiah to stand at the door and proclaim to those who come to the Temple that while they didnโ€™t correct their ways and their deeds, they couldnโ€™t call that place the Temple of Jehovah.

The Lord is always checking our hearts and seeing the deeds and actions of men. Even though Israelites were sitting at the Temple, looking at their conduct, even though they still called it temple they werenโ€™t worshiping God anymore. Instead they had forsaken the Lord and started serving other gods in their hearts.

Those people, while serving other gods in the temple of their hearts, come to the Lordโ€™s house, thatโ€™s what the sin of the horns of the altar in the temple means. In the same way, when we have let the sin be carved in the temple of our hearts, just because we go to church it doesnโ€™t mean we are serving God. On the contrary, we are committing the sin at the horns of the altar. Matthew 5 says: โ€œIf you are offering your gift at the altar and there remember that your brother has something against you, leave your gift there before the altar. First go and be reconciled to your brother, then come and offer your gift.โ€ [๋„ˆํฌ๊ฐ€ ๋ถ„์ด ๋‚˜๋„ ํ•ด๊ฐ€์ง€๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์„ ๋„˜๊ธฐ์ง€๋งˆ๋ผ]? These words show us how important is to worship the Lord in truth and spirit in the Temple of our hearts.

Even if I go to worship the Lord, if my thoughts stray and my heart is captivated by earthly things then Iโ€™ve forsaken the Lord and have started worshiping other gods. Instead of fearing and leaning on God, Iโ€™m fearing and leaning on those earthly things.

Jeremiah 2:13 tells us about the two sins of Israel, the sin of forsaking God, the fountain of the living water: In verse 13 of the text, about the sin of forsaking the Lord it says: He who forsakes the Lord, fountain of the living water, carves his sin with the tip of the diamond scribe.

2:13 tells us that a broken well that canโ€™t contain water is a sin. But, how can it be a sin to dig a broken well? Jeremiah explains this one more time on verse 14.

2:19 tells us โ€œyour sins will condemn you.โ€ Therefore, when it tells us โ€œconsider then realizeโ€ itโ€™s telling us to think about our sins and recognize them. Verse 19 explains more about those two sins. On 2:19 tells us that is evil to forsake the Lord, fountain of living water, and having no fear of him in your heart.

The Lord is the fountain of living water but, who has to dig the well so we can drink? Us. If you forsake God, fountain of the living water, and dig a well to obtain another living water, then that well will be broken and wonโ€™t be able to gather water.

If we look at Jeremiahโ€™s confession on todayโ€™s text, how can people make into a god something that isnโ€™t a god? It is a sin to forsake the Lord, fountain of the living water, and also to dig the broken well of death to serve another god. In other words, Israel forsake the Lord and served another god. It is a sin not to fear God and depend on Him alone.

Second, we canโ€™t erase and forgive our sins ourselves but the Lord can. In praise, the Lordโ€™s endless power is so big He can melt our stonelike hearts. Without the power of the Lord our sins canโ€™t be erased or forgiven.

Since the translation of Jeremiah 13:23 has been wrongly done to mean the contrary, I will translate this part one more time to English. The Ethiopians canโ€™t change their dark skin to a lighter one, just as you canโ€™t change the spots of a leopard, you who are accustomed to do evil wonโ€™t be able to do good either. This means that those of you who are used to committing sins and whose heart is stained by sins canโ€™t change.

Jeremiah 4, โ€œcircumcise yourselves, circumcise your hearts, remove the foreskin of your hearts and come back to Jehovah. The Lord wanted the Israelites to abandon their sinful acts and go back to God. In the Old Testament, if we circumcised our hearts, cleansed our skin, thoroughly repented and went back to God, we could receive forgiveness for our sins. But after the arrival of Jesus, even if we circumcise our hearts and repent, if we donโ€™t cleanse with the Lordโ€™s precious Blood we canโ€™t receive forgiveness.

I have cleansed my heart that was stained with a sin darker than ink, believing that your blood is flowing I was cleansed. But we must lean on the warning words that we canโ€™t cleanse our sins only with the Blood of Jesus Christ.

Therefore, the Lord redeems us with that Blood as payment. He forgives our sins with that blood. When we have sinned by believing in Jesus, if we truly repent our sins will be washed away by His Blood. Only the Blood of Jesus will wash my sins. Only the Blood of Jesus will allow me to come back.

What does it mean when in Jeremiah 2 it says โ€œeven if you clean yourself with lye or wash yourself with a lot of soap, your sins will remain the same? It means that we canโ€™t cleanse or forgive our sins by any human method. Do you think that if we pay money we can receive forgiveness for our sins?
Or can we receive forgiveness for our sins base on our honor? Even if we forgive each otherโ€™s sins between ourselves, the people, do our sins still remain the same in heaven? Why canโ€™t the problem of spiritual sins be solved?

Even if our internal sins are forgiven by a visible person, we also have been caught by the spiritual part of our sins. Because we received the gift of creation from God and we live under His laws, if we donโ€™t receive Godโ€™s forgiveness we canโ€™t erase our sins.

Both in the Ten Commandments and Godโ€™s words, what He is saying is that it doesnโ€™t matter if it is a visible sin or a spiritual one, because His law says to not commit any sins at all. If He is the Chief Justice of the Supreme Court, even if the person is this worldโ€™s King or the president, if they donโ€™t pass Godโ€™s judgement they canโ€™t erase their sins either.

If I break this worldโ€™s laws Iโ€™m sent to prison and I canโ€™t receive forgiveness by repaying for my sins with material things or my honor. You must go through the proper legal process. And if the Chief of Justice is okay with it and gives the President a special pardon, then everything is okay.

When the Israelites were ruined by their sins Moses didnโ€™t want to abandon his people so he asked for his name to be erased from the Book of Life too and asked the Lord to forgive them. But God answered that he would hold those who had sinned accountable for their sins.

In other words, we canโ€™t erase or forgive our own sins ourselves; only God can do that. Also, the Bible says that the sins of the children arenโ€™t the sins of the fathers; neither the sins of the fathers are to be repaid by their children. He who has sinned must pay the price for his sin himself.

In other words, no one can erase or forgive the sins of another. This is Godโ€™s fair judgement. Todayโ€™s passage says that those who have abandoned Jehovah and have put their believes in the flesh of the body will be doomed, that is, they will receive judgement for their sins. Only those who lean on Jehovah and put their trust in the Lord will be blessed. They will receive the blessing of prosperity in everything.

What can we do so our stonelike heart will become a fertile field where the Lordโ€™s words can plant its seed in? Isnโ€™t that something to worry about? In the Book of Matthew 13, in the Parable of the Sower it says that the seed that has no deep root, when trouble or persecution comes, it will fall away.

How can the Lordโ€™s words plant its seed in a closed hard sotnelike heart? There isnโ€™t just one way to train ourselves. Always being aware of our shortcomings we can train our ego.

Training means to cultivate myself through the Lordโ€™s words and eventually develop myself through that cultivation. What good would I be if I donโ€™t cultivate and change myself? Training is diminishing our ego by learning more about Jesus through the Lordโ€™s words.

The Bible starts and ends with Jesus. In St. Johnโ€™s Book of Revelations it says โ€œI am the Alpha and the Omega, I am the First and the Last, I am the Beginning and the End.โ€

Doesnโ€™t the Genesis 1:1 start with the creation of heaven and earth? But if we look at those words in Hebrew, โ€œin the beginning of the world God created heaven and earth,โ€ in this passage it also says that the messiah Jesus will come.

But if only heaven and earth had been created, there wasnโ€™t anything in the world, the people hadnโ€™t been created yet, how can it already say that Jesus was coming? These words mean that the Lord isnโ€™t going to abandon the world after creating it. Instead he is going to interfere, oversee and take care of it until the end. He will also come to finish it at the End.

That is because Jesus is the only way of life and that path is the path of truth. The Bible says that only Jesus can go to God our Father. Abandoning this way of life is choosing the path of death. To walk on the path of sins. This week also, I pray in the name of Jesus that through Jesus Christ you will walk the path of life and the path of truth.

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Born in a bilingual family I grew up speaking Spanish and French. When I started school my parents decided to enroll me in an English school so I would learn the language as a native. Thanks to this I've been able to speak the three languages since I was young which made possible for me to do translation part-time jobs while I was in university.ย 

Pushed by my love for traveling and discovering new cultures I decided to study my Master Degree in Film, Television and Multimedia in the beautiful country of South Korea, where I learnt the language and graduated in record time for a foreigner.ย 

While working I was entrusted with business and legal documents to translate for my company as well as all the entertainment contents from our clients. My experience also include marketing and advertising experience, as well as religious texts for different churches.ย 

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