日本語 から 英語 技術/工学 特許

Greetings all. I've been lurking here for a while and finally have question I'd like to ask.

Recently, I've been asked to translate some patents in a literal manner for so-called "PCT filing". In the "Means for Solving the Problems" section of these patents, there's a recurring sentence structure that I'm unsure how best to render "literally". This is the structure...

本発明の第２態様に係るXXXによれば、上記第１態様において、********ことが好ましい。

How does this sound?
"With regard to the XXX of the second aspect of the present invention, in the aforementioned first aspect, it is preferable that ******."

Regards,
Dennis