flutter around

Arabic translation: فراشة تزهو حولنا *** تكاد تلمس أرضنا

11:07 Feb 5, 2017
English to Arabic translations [PRO]
Art/Literary - Education / Pedagogy
English term or phrase: flutter around
Hello everyone,
I’m not much concerned about the translation of that term, I just wonder if there is a way to make this simple verse flow in Arabic as it does in English, including rhymes if possible!
Thanks!

Butterfly, butterfly, flutter around
Butterfly butterfly, touch the ground
Abdelaziz TALIBI
Morocco
Local time: 02:49
Arabic translation:فراشة تزهو حولنا *** تكاد تلمس أرضنا
Explanation:
فراشة تزهو حولنا *** تكاد تلمس أرضنا
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Sherif Ramadan
Egypt
Local time: 04:49
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thanks
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Summary of answers provided
4 +1فراشة تزهو حولنا *** تكاد تلمس أرضنا
Sherif Ramadan
5نحلق / ننطلق في الفضاء
einass kandil
4فراشة فراشة ترفرف بالقرب *** فراشة فراشة تلامس الترب
ProZAli
4الفراشة ترفرف بالطول و العرض، الفراشة ها هي تلمس الأرض
Oz Hamdoun (X)
3في الجو نرفرف
Saleh Dardeer


  

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14 mins   confidence: Answerer confidence 3/5Answerer confidence 3/5
في الجو نرفرف


Explanation:
محاولة
الفراشة الفراشة في السماء ترفرف
الفراشة الفراشة على الأرض ترجف

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Note added at 15 mins (2017-02-05 11:22:57 GMT)
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محاولة أخرى

الفراشة الفراشة في الجو ترفرف
الفراشة الفراشة على الأرض تهفهف



Saleh Dardeer
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38 mins   confidence: Answerer confidence 4/5Answerer confidence 4/5 peer agreement (net): +1
فراشة تزهو حولنا *** تكاد تلمس أرضنا


Explanation:
فراشة تزهو حولنا *** تكاد تلمس أرضنا
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Sherif Ramadan
Egypt
Local time: 04:49
Works in field
Native speaker of: Arabic
PRO pts in category: 32
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thanks

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46 mins   confidence: Answerer confidence 5/5
نحلق / ننطلق في الفضاء


Explanation:
You do not have to be literal


einass kandil
Egypt
Local time: 04:49
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Native speaker of: Native in ArabicArabic, Native in EnglishEnglish
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2 hrs   confidence: Answerer confidence 4/5Answerer confidence 4/5
فراشة فراشة ترفرف بالقرب *** فراشة فراشة تلامس الترب


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ProZAli
United Kingdom
Local time: 02:49
Native speaker of: Native in ArabicArabic
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16 hrs   confidence: Answerer confidence 4/5Answerer confidence 4/5
الفراشة ترفرف بالطول و العرض، الفراشة ها هي تلمس الأرض


Explanation:
محاولة

Oz Hamdoun (X)
United States
Local time: 21:49
Native speaker of: Native in ArabicArabic, Native in EnglishEnglish
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